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| Frozen.by.Sloth 2008-06-23 ch 21,  | abuseyo. I just read the story. I must admit I found the ending a bit odd. The overall story was amazing, otherwise. I loved it. The characters, the fact none of them were too perfect, or too evil, or too, well, anything really. They were realistic, though not psychoanalyzed in odd depths. ^-^ I love their love story, and I spontaneously fell in love with your style of writing. I thought it especially endearing how you described their kisses, though. Something among the lines of 'that's all I can tell you, sorry' at some point. ^-^ Well, I love it. Thanks for sharing. I hope you keep writing. Enjoy~ |
| Hye there 2008-06-15 ch 22, anon. | abuseYou ended it like there was a sequel?-will there be one? I apsolutely loved the story. Fin is the best && MArley is feisty indeed |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-06-11 ch 22, | abuseI love your story! And you! Haha xx |
| tree of life and shadow 2008-06-01 ch 4, | abusei just started reading this and i like it. i dont mind cliche at all :P i love finn. the way he keeps callimg her smirf is awesome. |
| DisiredLove 2008-05-14 ch 21, | abusemy all time fav. story in th whole wide world! |
| DisiredLove 2008-05-14 ch 14, | abuseTHAT WAS GREAT! i can't believe she let herself get punched! it's wonderful! =] |
| DisiredLove 2008-05-13 ch 3, | abuselets all hope this fin guy is a vamp! lol i liked this chapter! it just keeps getting better! |
| DisiredLove 2008-05-13 ch 2, | abusethats a good chapter as well! =] |
| DisiredLove 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuse=] this was an intresting chapter |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 21, | abusehmph stupid lincoln and juan! well Juan doesn't deserve Grace anways and yay Marley and Finn are got married! wo! =]] |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 20, | abuseha! you go marley! =] and i hope they work it out at the end of the year |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 19, | abuseha! go marley! |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 18, | abuseah lincoln is such a b*tch! |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 17, | abuseyayy they made up =] |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 16, | abuseeek! i hope they work it out =]] hehe |