wow, very vivid imagery. the whole idea was very unique. great work

keep writing

I love the sensuality in this. i especially love the 'too tru' line of "Music is a universal language that all can understand." I didn't expect what was to happen, and it kept me reading through to the last lin. nice job. I'm very glad you wrote more, I do very much enjoy reading your writing. I wonder, though - is this a true story? Because it would be awfully tragic if you fell in love and never saw the one again. All and all, I love this. Great job ^^

Aw... SO very Sweet indeed!! :p If I remember well, you once told me about this... Or am I imagining things...? :) That happens a lot with me... :p As you well know... :)

'People were reduced to flying patches of colours'

Beautifully described... :) Beautiful written!! :)

Hugies K

aww this is so sweet

great job with this :D

bekah