Hm... I must say that's quite saddening, but very well written!!

No offense this is sickening, it's very discriptive, and can either have the reader repulsed or relatable to the poem... and sadly this is how many teens feel, and what they do to become society's definition of 'perfect'...

I don't think you can imagine how much I love and respect this poem. The emotion put into this truly amazes me. It's just so true and it reminds me of what this world has become. It's depressing that people should have to go through this. No one should have this burden. It does nothing but bring you down for the remainder of your life. But back to you. I love this poem ,absolutely love it. I never know what to expect from you...sad, then weird, or happy...aH confusion. [[love it though]]

Amazing. Yet again, I am speechless. I love your style.

Nice. It describes the anxiety I guess, that some girls experience for being overweight. It must be horrible...trying to change so badly, and yet weight loss is gradual. I've never had a problem with my weight (heh, well, I still need to reach 100 pounds) but I strive to keep it that way. The warped standards of today's world makes some people feel so horribly about themselves, and you've captured such an emotion. ^_^

That is really good. It's so sad, but people do feel that way. Excellent job.

you made a sad. =( a good sad, but still a sad. nothing i can say, except that you're wonderful, and that i'm glad neither you nor any of my other great friends are like this. bad things happen when people don't value themselves as they are.

yes, i'm a hypocrite. sh.