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You disappoint, My Friend, My Love
mizu no kokoro
2006-10-18 . chapter 1
aw, i can relate to this piece^^ well done
keep writing
Youkai Author
2006-10-17 . chapter 1
Very well written! I like the poem as a whole- and the breaks are at the best places. I totally agree with it as well. I can't stand it when someone lets one bad experience prohibit himself from ever living.
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