This is really cool and I really like it. I'm sure I've totally missed the meaning that you applied to it, but that's the great thing about poetry - it can be interpretted in many ways! Good job!

Your right I proibably didnt understand what exactly you were trying to convey but, since I applied some of my own point of view I ended up making this whole story in my head. Its amazing that you can do that, not many poeple can, and I really did enjoy this.