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| Kraheera-Raven 2008-04-26 ch 91,  | abuseOMG, I love this story. You're fantastic! It's fantastic! |
| liminalzest 2008-04-23 ch 91, | abuseliked the chapter for the "divided loyalties" part. very nicely done. am hoping you will update more frequently. |
| Written out Longing 2008-04-21 ch 91, | abuseWell, I had to admit this is...uncanny. x3 Cyril and Kera act just like me and a certain someone. Weird xP Ah, yes. Loeren taking an oath...wonder if this brings trouble or greatness, I will not know until you continue. Later, milady, continue the great work. ^.~ |
| Written out Longing 2008-04-09 ch 90, | abuse(Wow, btw, gratz on the almost 100 chapters.) Intense fight there. I almost thought something really really REALLY bad was going to happen... Your a wonderful angst writer. O.o |
| Stang65 2008-04-09 ch 90, | abuseO M G! This was absolutely FANTASTIC! Totally loved the fight scene - FINALLY the Keelites see just how fierce the Zurates will be in battle... maybe they'll train a little harder. GREAT JOB!! |
| Stang65 2008-02-19 ch 89, | abuseLOVED it!! So, now I'm excited about the sparring match between Kera and Loeran... Can hardly wait to see the update on this... YAY! |
| Written out Longing 2008-02-16 ch 89, | abuseAye, Good question Kera. I severely hope Kera or Loeran do not get badly hurt. Maybe bruised a bit brashly... but nothing serious. Continue le match ... ^^ |
| Stang65 2008-02-12 ch 88, | abuseO M G! WRONG ANSWER, soldier!! LOL! Come on, Kera, show him what you're made of... *BIG grin while waggling eyebrows* |
| Written out Longing 2008-01-26 ch 88, | abuseowee. Kera is a bit defensive herself...mentally anyway. But then again, she's not my character so I can't say what I would do. *cue sheepish giggle* As usual please continue. |
| Written out Longing 2008-01-18 ch 87, | abuse...What just happened? Oy...continue please! I need to know more... |
| X0ImaginaryGirl0X 2008-01-16 ch 87, | abuseOMG! What happened to her! Tell Me! TELL ME!! XD |
| liminalzest 2008-01-15 ch 87, | abusean updates, finally! and a cliffhanger at that! lol |
| Stang65 2008-01-15 ch 87, | abuseI like this chapter. It was interesting, especially the dream she had. What a nightmare THAT would be - to find yourself marrying a jerk like Rindran, and then seeing all your loved ones and friends either in danger or dead. I wasn't quite sure what happened after she woke up. The description was a good use of first person reality (if there is such a term - you know what I mean). Either way, yeah... Cyril is always there when she needs him... they are so sweet together. AW! Update soon! |
| Stang65 2008-01-11 ch 86, | abuseSo... Loeran is one of the GOOD GUYS? I'm glad he was there to help Kera escape, but he seems like kind of a jerk to the Keelites. Oh well, there is no love lost on the Keelites' side either, so I guess they're even. Poor Kade is still upset about his brother. He's so sweet. I hope Kera doesn't make any rash decisions about returning to Zura - even with the protection of a group like Loeran's, she would be in a lot of danger. So, when does the war actually begin? Are these people gonna get the chance to show off their fighting skills or not? When do we get to see the Zurate smack down? It should be really good... lol. K, later alligator. |
| Written out Longing 2008-01-03 ch 86, | abuseAye, here is a moment where I find it difficult to know who to believe...and cliff hangars stink. Well I guess it is up to everyone's actions to believe or not. Sorry for the late review... ^^ |