I like it. I like the way you stagger thought and diologue it creates feelings. I can't wait to read more of this story. I'll be reading more of your works.

This was amazingly written.Please continue. I just have one question (hopefully it's not a dumb one.) Is Milo another name for Miles? Because you'd variate from Miles to Milo and back and I was just wondering. Anyway, keep up the wonderful work.

Aww. I want to see where this goes.

Especially if it goes to a motel. A CREEPY motel.

What motel isn't creepy?

The flors have bad fluid stains.

Mitchell is Moving
By Marjorie Weinman Sharmat
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I like that poem. Where'd you find it?