Wow, that was an excellent conclusion to the story. I loved it.

Sorry for taking so long to review. I never forgot this story though :)

Continue to write, because you really have something going for you here.

~Carm~

well that was a sad ending i loved the story i hope you do like a sequal or something...

I'm really, truly amazed at how this story is only getting better and better. With every new chapter, I'm even more impressed with your talents as a writer.

Keep up this superly duperly great work!

~Carm~

PS
I'm so very very sorry for not reviewing sooner! It may take me awhile to read and review, but just know that I still am, 'kay? :)

Awsome, I'll keep reading, have to stop here I'm afraid, just for now though, if you get a chance, go check out my story Running Water.

Signed, Mayu-San-Sakura, known as Mayu-Chan-Sakura on

Excellent chapter! I loved every word of it :) I like the way you use dialogue. It's very flow-y (if that's a word) and moves the story along at a nice pace. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more!

~carm~

I love this story. It's got a little bit of everything...action, adventure, humour, horror. You're doing an excellent job :) I can't wait for more!

~carm~

hahahahahaha!
sounds like my friends!
lmao!

Nice first chapter. It reeks of suspense I hope I can read the other 19 soon. You have a really unique concept here.


Surreal

she has a green bug??
i have a green bug!
lol
love the story so far btw!

Love your story, please continue!

lol.. great chapter! I luved it, you may not get alot of reviews, but your one hell of a writer! hehe.. cant wait for the next chapter.

I really love the story line and the characters are so interesting! They way you write really draws the reader in, can't wait till the next chapter.

What! Ren and travis! I didn't see that coming! Awesome story, i'm already in waits for the next chapter.

Please tell me there is moore to this story... Its really good.

It sounds like she's a werewolf because her parents were, and she's been one since before she was in kindergarten, yet you have the line "It was the perfect song for a werewolf, especially one that had just been bitten."
Animal I Have Become is a great song.