Nice chapter! I liked it! Keep up the good work! :D

Heart-eating?? Ew... I wonder if his breath stank... Anyway, that was a good chapter! I'm rather curious about this Darious character! I'll move on to the next chapter now and then I'll try to put up my chapter tonight. No promises though!

Good chapter. It was interesting.

That was cool. I guess I should start my chapter and get it done soon.

Yay! Finally an update. Interesting chapter. I can't wait to see where this story goes next. It will be cool to see what happens when all of our Rebel characters meet up. Great work Dalik.

Danielle Thamasa
S.S. Dailey

Good Chapter. Sorry about taking so long, but I'm planning on updating next. I have about 2 pages of a newly revised chapter ready for me. I don't think we should have an order, just call the next chapter, cause going in order is gonna get confusing later on. Maybe later, like near the end, well work out a offical order, but for now, just go in what ever order works.

Sorry it took so long to review. I have read the chapter several times and I'm still trying to figure out what is going to happen next. It was amazing to read. I loved all of it.

Who's up next? I'm planning my next chapter but we have to wait for everyone to post their second before anyone can post up their third. And then we have to remember that the characters need to start meeting up.

Danielle Thamasa
aka S.S. Dailey

What happened to them?? I'm really curious!! This chapter was so good! Are they dead?? And what's with the smell of water?? I'm going to say it again - the chapter was so good!! :P Okay, who's going to do the next chapter??

WOW! Awesome chapter, Tasha. That was amazing. I can't wait to see what comes next. And, I'm with you in the relief of us being done for the moment. And, I have no idea what is going on with the chapters either.

This seems fine you silly muffin :P This made me think of Aladdin in the beginning -with the stealing stuff from the stall thing. And 'brouhaha' is actually a word? Wow, I learn something new everyday -that is officially my favourite word, well after kaffuffle (which I don't think I spelt right) but yes, writing with dialects is not very easy (well I don't find it to be, so I avoid it) and often confuses the reader, and it looks kind of messy too, but I didn't get too confused. It reminded me of when Hagrid speaks in Harry Potter, you know what I mean? Not sure of what kind of accent you were going for with the owner of the inn, though. Well done on the interesting chapter :) You did do well.

Am I the only person not using the Dark Knights yet? I need to do something about that.

Um, wow, long chapter, lol. You have interesting dialogue, and Mae seems fun ( I can't remember whether I've said that already) but I like yhat she talks to herself, or rather thinks to herself, though I did get confused when Maron came along, because I'm tired and it took me awhile that his thoughts are bold italics. Additionally I did notice that you used a comma after a full stop a few time, not too sure why but yeah. Good, fun chapter. I liked it. Did she eventually get to eat then?? lol.

Sorry, I didn't review this earlier. It's so terrible that I don't even remember what's happening with other people's portions of the story, so when Kainda killed Kas I was shocked because it was so fast but partly because I didn't really feel connected with him yet, but maybe that was the idea. Anyhow, I think you did a great job. I think I may need to go and read this all from the beginning so I remember what's going on.

Excellent chapter Darklight Shadow. I really love all of the action in it. It will be interesting to see what happens when Cearul meets Kainda.

As to the question of order I really don't care what order we go in. Since Dalik may not be updating for a while I don't know if the first order will work anymore. I think the best option would be to have everyone post a chapter in order of who has it ready. We just need to make sure that everyone posts each cycle before moving on.

S.S. Dailey

P.S. Keep up the great work Project Supernatural. Let's try to not go on hiatus again.

I agree with you on your 'rusty writing' conclusion. I'm not trying to be mean or anything. I liked it though. It still caught my interest. Can't wait for y'all's next update! Oh yeah! I liked the Malay phrase too! ;)

For the information, it's fine. And the sequence? I don't really care. Dalik's too lazy to update again. I'l do any order.