Love the ending love the poem.

Keep it up.

Wolf.

ooh i love this. i think the formatting works very well to make it powerful, the ending is wonderful

First off, I LOVED the way you chose to format this.

Nextly, this is an absolutely great poem. The last few lines were definetly my favorite.

I just loved the feeling I got from this, and the way it flowed so easily through my brain.