Oh, I like this! "Lachrhymose" is an amazing word, is it not? You always seem to come up with the most interesting and rare words. :) "sand edged/ sculptures" is lovely, also, but I adore the first two lines. bella

What does "lachrymose" mean? I'm sure whatever it means, it'd make the poem make a lot more sense ... "sand-edged scupltures of the night" is pretty. I like it.

Felicia.

Excellent visuals and sound. I like how you've emphasized each word to heighten the effect. Very well written.