that was really the most amazing bit of poetry that i have found on this site, ever, and i am quite the story surfer.
that spoke to me more than anything, because it reminded me of myself, days past,everything.
that was really, truly, the most deep and inspiring thing i've read.

Hmm...this poem is very deep. Kudos to you, love.

this poem..ohmigosh.. its amazing. i love it..and plus I feel really drawn to it because it was wrote on the same night that some pretty strange things happened to me and this poem basically described how i was feeling. thanks for sharing such an amazing poem with the world--i loved it.

i really liked this- i know it sounded blame, but it's too and i'm still on a laughing gas hangover from the dentist. But anyway- I liked the line at the end 'So don't try.'. It's defensive but it sounds like it's defense from experience. And whatever happened about the football game, I'm gonna guess you went and got back stabbed (unlikely though, because if so you'd be spitting angry) or you didn't go and sat at home in the dark in a creepy house like I did at the homecoming came. Either way stop being so depressed because remember, people who do zoloft are more likely to kill themselves. And besides if you die I won't know what happens in Going Under

..woah

dude I read this out loud to my friends and they thought this was great. I really love this!!

But what made you fell this way??

I love the format and everything how u started and how u closed it.