Wow.
U should make like i dunno a sequle or somethin (Sorry I suck really bad at spelling)

Well, I read the story to the end. :)

Overall it was written quite nicely (spelling, structure, grammar etc.), and it kept my attention, which is a definite plus in my books. I'd like to see more of this, and well done.

OMG this is so good. I wish I could write slash like you. I just can't seem to do it. You are a really good writer. I like this story, please update! I'm adding this story and you to my faves.

Ah! This was incredible! Damn, I want to rip all my stories to shreds, this is so good! Please keep it up, because I liked it. Everything fit together nicely, no cliche crap like that. Well, not the usual...nii, I'll shutup now, but this is going on my favorites, so I can read it over and over. ^_^