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Reviews For: How You Make It Through

BlueRose218
2006-11-07
ch 1,
abuseVery emotional, and the imagery is unique and accurate. (Side Note: Dangit! How did you get the formatting to behave!?! NEVER lets me put my poems in their seperate stanzas!! Is this part of the site's new format or something?) Anyway, good poem, and I'm off to read more!
Osunale
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abuseLove the imagery of water (ocean, gulf, rivers, coast, sea) with the bed and the emotions of moving on. The water gives movement and an exuse for bridges, and is the perfect element for this piece. Excellent work.
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