It's nice. Lovely really. Well, more lovely than dramatic. But that's just me. It feels like you're missing something. I don't really know how to explain this but it feels like your writing starts out strong and then just ends up I don't know without feeling? Like you've lost faith in it. I'm not trying to be harsh but that's just what I get from it. It's a nice write though. You're, obviously, talented. No matter what I say.

Beautiful work Matthew! This is a truly spectacular piece!

And FP is FINALLY updating their site. My day has been officially made! :)

Darling, this is so heartfelt with a tiny hint of sorrow. I love the images and the voice. Very nicely done.