Eks, MYS-TER-I-OUS! The suspense will KILL me! Angel? Running from the LAW? Where will the mysteries END? When will my blatent disregard for the rules about CAPITALIZATION end?!?!

Heart heart,
XOXOX, Smiley Face,
Mikey

I'm so confused at the moment. Extremely intrigued as well though. Can't wait to find out more about Aara's past. Don't really trust Damien yet. What kind of guardian angel drives a Ferrari? Haha, please keep on writing.

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what a concept. i mean, real but surreal

lost conciousness in a good or bad way?

good deeds are way too suspicious

This chapter seemed a bit..flat, especially compared to the others. There needs to be more transtion between things and Aara's impressions and thoughts on what's happening.

Oh god, I feel mean now :P Please don't take offence. I am still
curious as to where this is going.

So I'm guessing Damien is either the guardian angel or a rapist/killer/something worse.

Damien is a cool name. Actually, I'm writing a story in which the guy's name is Damian. I like both versions of the name.

I love your summary, by the way. I'm curious to see where you go with this and what Aara might have done to become wanted by the police.

OMG! Was her passing out because of her cold, or something in the food?

hm, what a concept.
i quite like this

0_0 you still find time to write?!