I liked this poem but couldnt quite find the rythm. Thats probably my fault though.

quite good, maddie! it is a subject easy to relate to, and feel that my emotions are masterfully played upon! the only phrasing im not too crazy about is "head over feet." I use cliche all the time. Everyone expects head over heels, so something like what you did to make the phrase your own seems to distract from the overall easy flow of the song.

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Affectionately,
Q

I love the way this poem sounds like a song. And the last two lines were especially memorable. it's long, but worth the time. and your word choice is amazing. awesome-ness.