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| Nina Windia 2008-07-22 ch 1,  | abuseOh, this is absolutely beautiful. I swear I felt a shiver pass through me as I read the lines of poetry at the bottom. Brilliant work, very moving. |
| elisefey 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was really wonderful. Poetic and moving. I love the way you used the relationship with the father and how dancing becomes sterile for her over time. The loss in that is beautiful and makes the relief at the end very powerful. |
| Zephy 2007-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseGorgeous. |