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Black and White Dreams 2006-11-25 . chapter 1
I like it, but it sems too repetitive. I also think you could do more with it.

*~Black and White Dreams~*
hellbentheretic 2006-11-04 . chapter 1
The title is not bad I was expecting something different though. Nice beginning, but I don't think its anything to write home about. Try expanding it!! It needs more content!

hellbentheretic
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