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Black and White Dreams
2006-11-25
ch 1,
abuseI like it, but it sems too repetitive. I also think you could do more with it.

*~Black and White Dreams~*
hellbentheretic
2006-11-04
ch 1,
abuseThe title is not bad I was expecting something different though. Nice beginning, but I don't think its anything to write home about. Try expanding it!! It needs more content!

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