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| Black and White Dreams 2006-11-25 ch 1,  | abuseI like it, but it sems too repetitive. I also think you could do more with it. *~Black and White Dreams~* |
| hellbentheretic 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseThe title is not bad I was expecting something different though. Nice beginning, but I don't think its anything to write home about. Try expanding it!! It needs more content! hellbentheretic |