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Black and White Dreams 2006-12-07 . chapter 1
I love this piece

"You said I should

Love you and I said

I don’t care"

I love those lines. Beautiful. Great job.

*~Black and White Dreams~*
angel953 2006-11-12 . chapter 1
o...who??!!

"wink, wink"

great job
Jupiter-Lightning 2006-11-02 . chapter 1
I really like this. Great job :)
sunday night sky 2006-10-19 . chapter 1
I don't really understand this piece. Maybe I'm missing something. Perhaps you could elaborate? I have a feeling this is sentimental and, probably, poignant. I love the lines 'You said I should Love you and I said I don't care'. They are gorgeous, well positioned too. If you have the time, please can you explain this piece to me [sorry, I'm probably being really slow].
Brinneh 2006-10-17 . chapter 1
i've read a few, and i could see some/most of them being chorus lines in a song. i just wish you would finish them and make them all a complete stand-alone.
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