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Enuwey
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseBuahahaha! I have enjoyed your story, and would enjoy more if there is any. Seeing as their isn't any more online at the moment I guess I'll just write this review before I go and poke around all the other stuff you have posted online.

I decided to read your story because of the overly long name. I found the name of your story intresting after I picked apart the name and came to understand what it said. Then I read your story. And then I laughed and wished for more.

I realize that the genere isn't that of humor, but I still found the story humorus and likeable in its own strange little way.

If I was a gramar nazi or an english teacher I might have found something wrong with your story and would be reviewing to tell you of this mistake.

Unfortunetly I am nither of those things and make far to many mistakes of my own to notice the minicule mistakes of others.

I did how ever notice the single word made out of many words and frankly quite liked it.

I do hope that you continue this story if you can. But if you don't, no hard feelings; Kay?

Good luck and good day.

-El
SilverMouth
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseThat. Was. Amazing. And I can honestly say that I know EXACTLY how you feel. My family's divorce pysch was a terrible terrible person and he would sit and stare and tell me to talk and make me cry. Then he got arrested for videotaping his clients going to the bathroom and using them for personal pleasure... then he committed suicide ten days later. And that is the end of that (a very depressing end... I feel terrible for his daughter and wife, and I don't think he deserved death).
DeLayNee
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuseThis is AMAZING! I don't know if you intended it, but this Anna girl came off as partially insane, and it was FANTASTIC! Keep writing, if this is what all your work is like.
-Delaney
Billy Shears
2006-12-10
ch 1,
abuseI love the style of this story.
Sakka-Fenikkusu
2006-12-04
ch 1,
abuseI like your style quite a bit. It's usually extremely hard for authors to create a situation like this. Go you.
MacNWoody
2006-11-15
ch 1,
abuseshort, sweet, and really good. good job, , -_O
Ghost in the Dark
2006-11-05
ch 1,
abuseSounds like just one of those days. Except with an evil shrink guy... but I digress; I really like this.
Max Radio
2006-10-18
ch 1,
abuseLike the first-person narration, and like what I call a left-handed thought process, kind of all over the place. Make sure not to overdo it, and we'll be fine, but also make the chapters a tad longer.

Good story. Continue.

7/10
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