Reviews for The Price of a Haunted Doll

Burnt Bread 2006-10-30 ch 1,	abusea tasteful view on a common urban legend. The auction note made the events seem more realistic than if you had tond them in story form. I would have liked to know more about the mystery behind the doll - who was the lady the child was scared about? Is there going to be a follow-up? or is this the end of this piece?
mjlb 2006-10-25 ch 1,	abuseThe way I read it (half in response to the previous review) it was written as an item description for an actual auction, and therefore, details would be unrealistic and unnecessary. I like it, I've seen auctions on Ebay for "haunted" stuff before, but you have your own little story behind it. Nice work. Sounds fitting for The Puppet Case (C2)
Sevidian 2006-10-17 ch 1,	abuseThis was pretty good. It really didnt sound too generic. The only thing is: it was really short. I think you could have gone into more detail on the wreck, etc. I did think except for the doll and the main character the other two others were rather flat and one-sided. I just think it needed a bit more detail. The writing and imagery were very good. All in all, a 6 or 7. Keep it up. ~Sevidian