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| Isca 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseA BEAUTIFUL piece! :) The hidden meanings of this are incredible. How we live through a life of different colours (of happiness and joy), and yet in the end (in death) we all return to the brightest, and greatest place of all (i.e. the white parchment). Excellent! |
| Leaving Here 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abusei love how you wrote this. |
| holadios 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abusevery good. Continue with your other story! It wonderful |
| Caught By Myself 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abuseWhat I like about this piece is that you've done something o profound with something that seems so simple, so trivial. Great job. :) |
| steinbock 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abuseoh! very good! definately an amazing piece of poetry! the symbolism, the flow, the word choice...all of it! very well done! bravo! |