Haunting questions,—what is poetry anyway that heart should miss it so?

Thx for your review. m.

I LOVE the language! My one suggestion would me to break down the line 'broken down, thy whithered soul in peices' into two lines, it seems too long for that paragraph.

Excellent Job!

I know exactly what you mean. I can occasionly go through a month or so of not writing, and, truth be told, i forget, but there's always this nagging feeling like a twig breaking at my side, always telling me to live my dream again, and write. Anyway, nice imagery.