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| Written 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abusethat was such a beautiful, sweet story.. wow. inspirational, seriously. I love how realistic you are with your main character and how bitter she becomes. well done! |
| under the influence 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abuseVery well done...really made me think |
| A.A-H.L 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseYAY! Happy ending! Well, Laurel was really stubborn, getting her hit, and selfish, complaining and being all bitter, but she learned her lesson and I'm happy about that. Cool story. |
| Lientje46 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseHey! This was a really nice, sweet story. I was a little disapointed to see that it was just a one-shot. Anyway, I really loved it! Well done. X Lien |