this is one of ur best works :) so beautifully written and the rhyming and flow is incredible ;) on my favs obviously :D

mez

That's cool!

Very pretty! The first part is my favorite:

"... She kissed me, on the lips

And her icy, finger tips..."

The imagery of this song is nice - and of course, a tad lustful. I like how you show things rather than tell them, because reading the same old "hE dUmPeD mee & it sUckd!" spiels on is so very tiresome...

Splendid.