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| FunkyFlower16 2006-12-19 ch 1,  | abusethis is one of ur best works :) so beautifully written and the rhyming and flow is incredible ;) on my favs obviously :D ~mez~ |
| Angelic Hellraiser 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseThat's cool! |
| Frore 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseVery pretty! The first part is my favorite: "... She kissed me, on the lips And her icy, finger tips..." The imagery of this song is nice - and of course, a tad lustful. I like how you show things rather than tell them, because reading the same old "hE dUmPeD mee & it sUckd!" spiels on is so very tiresome... Splendid. |