Oh how I can sympathize! The older I get, the more I expect out of my writing, and perversely, the more it seems to derail. All I can suggest is to just keep writing, however crappy it may seem, and hope to hit on something. Best of luck.

For something about writer's block, it doesn't sound like you have one, since it's so nicely written. ^__^

Ooh, I have definitely felt like that. Actually I do pretty much all the time.. anyway, you express it nicely. Good luck! =)

Beautiful, beautiful poem; its so deep and wonderful and AMAZING.

Just so pretty.

~* Noelle