Chilling ending... I like your story, Ninja. I wish I could write like you. Excellent write. Hurry and post the next chapter. ^_~ Write on and God Bless ya.

Very interesting story, Ninja. I'm off to read the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work.

There have been many who have died for Christ. Did that person shoot you? I can't wait to read more, this story is so interesting. I'm surprised that more Christians aren't reading it. Btw...I am a Baptist too. I also posted today even though it isn't much but it is a start. lol Hey, keep up the awesome work and I will be checking back for more. Hope ya have a blessed day. MG

Wow! Are ya a preacher or somthing to that effect? I have never read anything like this on here before. It packs a hard punch. Meaning, if your not ready then ya better get ready. I enjoyed this very much and I will be back to read more. Keep up the excellent work. God Bless!

Interesting start, this is going to be god
Much in Him,
xRachx