it's always a great poem when it makes you think, and this one certainly does. love it.

Good God, has it been...ten days?! I've been going through joria withdrawal, it's nice to get back into the rhythm of four words, four lines. :) "weave me absolute" is just perfect. `~bella~`

This speaks greatly of certain situations that aren't perfect, but they work because they aren't. It's so great ... because I know a lot about those. I have very bizarre relationships with people ...

Anywho, it rocks. WRITE ON!

Felicia.

Oh that sounds so cool! Good job!

a very nice poem. eerie and abstract. i liked it very much!


~rira-chan

wow i love this poem...so chilling!

your words are beautiful and very powerful! powerful piece!

adding to my C2!