Wow...

Don't you just love those niggling little ideas that you simply love but they really have no story??

This is beautiful, very surreal. I really can't say anything else.

Don't worry about turning it into a longer work. Sometimes the one-shots are the best they can be and anything else might ruin them...

~GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings

Wow! I know I helped you a little a LITTLE at the begining but I didn't think thats what you were getting to. I think you shoud make it into a story seeing as you muse has been working so hard anyway.

TTYL
Midnight

neat-o and keen Skip-Bo! Love the one-shot...and you really SHOULD continue on with this...or at the very least make a real story out of the one that was in this one. ^_~

Wow, this is good! I think it could be even better if you extended it and made it a novella- or short story-length. 'He' sounds so...mysterious and...cool.