i like it.. especially the middle stanza

I have no idea how you do it, but as I said before, your details to every little thing is just awesome. Keep up the good work. And thanks for my review as well =).

awesome. slightly confuing but awesome. see ya later!

omg thought ive read this sumwhere b4... it was at skool =) so u pretty much know wot i think... if u cant remember =P LUV IT!!

luv u XoXoXoXo

O... m... f... g... that was good. That was REALLY good. Seriously, truly, honestly, my new favorite from you.

B.

Hi Josh! ^_^

I haven't heard from you for ages! Or rather, haven't seen a new poem from you for quite awhile! So how have you been?

I HEART your poem! Like omg! lol. I can so completely relate, and this poem is so gorgeously written that I wish that I could write like you! Damn Josh! Where do you get your ideas from? Or rather, how do you figure out how to construct poetry like this? Truly stunning job! *gives handful of chocolate chip cookies* yay!

Gorgeous. Gorgeous. Gorgeous. ^_^

Write on mate!

~Anna~ ^_^

Brilliant poem. The lines are constructed really well and have a pretty good balance. No criticism from me *huggles*