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| Youkai Author 2006-10-18 ch 1,  | abuseWonderfully creepy. The repition in the first four stanzas really soldifies this piece. At first I though it'd be about, well, a nightmare- but then you turn around and make it something similar but not quite the same. Very well written. |
| rira-chan 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abusewow. very beautiful. ~rira-chan |