Wow. O.O This definitely goes on my favorites. It's so good I don't have any advice. Wow.

(You made yourself the heart beneath my floor)- Edgar Allen Poe, very nice! I like how it completely works with this poem (and plus, I love Poe). It's very creatively done with the parts.

Ooh, wicked! I'm so glad I'm not her. At least I HOPE I'm not her. Am I her? Oh, please don't let me be her! -she asks seriously- I could really be her... Truly... (a stormy day)

This one is a bit abstract for my tastes, but I still like what you've done with the rhyme in this - you have the end rhyme, but you also have bits where the lines come close to rhyming at the end, but there's an extra word tacked on that makes it an abab rhyme or what have you. Interesting. Keep writing! :)

Ooh, this one is haunting. The rhyme works so well in this one to reinforce the flow of the piece and the message. Just nicely written. Keep writing! :)

well expressed with beautiful imagery. i liked this alot!

I really enjoyed these two poems, it was very well expressed and you conveyed the emotions well. I especially loved th last line, '(You made yourself the heart beneath my floor.)- creative and effective. Well done and continue writing

I really like this. I like how you sort of flipped the images - it makes the "you" person seem so much more big and universal. Ahaha... that didn't make sense. But you get it, right? The only thing that kind of poked at me was the second to last line, but that just might be me. Maybe tweak w/ it a little? But besides that, there's a really great flow to it, very good. :)

... this is beautiful. Very sad. I love every line, especially the ending. So unexpected. Lovely.