I completely understand people mistaking you for a poet. I have more poems than stories, too. I prefer to think of myself as a poetic writer.

"A million love songs lay useless on the desk because they never touch on the feelings that are weighing in my chest."

I feel so tempted to make fun of you for this. Consider yourself lucky that I'm not posting on all my forums, "Bread writes sappiness!" Okay, I wouldn't really do that. Or would I?

Nice job with this. I love everything you write. I worship everything you write. You make me really not want to eat any bread. Because, it feels like... cannibalism.

BREAD IS GOD

WORSHIP BREAD

Ok, so maybe that's going a little too far, considering that you reacted to me just calling you "awesome", but, really, you rock beyond belief.

Without Brains

Ms. Fenikkusu

Very, very, very good! I loved this. Keep writing, because you have got talent. This was definately the best poem I've ever read!

Wow... this was so good, it gave me chills.
Possibly the first thing I've read on Fictionpress to do so.
Amazing work, keep it up.

This is quite a good piece; you have used some great phrases, such as "People are... time" and "Your whispers...veins", and the rhyming isn't too overpowering. It is in an interesting format; not quite poem and not quite prose/letter. I think more could have been said if it were slightly longer, but nevertheless, it is an interesting bit of writing.

Way to have self-doubt. Don't delete poems ... it's sad. Poetry = fun. Even if you don't think so ...

Ok. This was pretty nice. It brings to mind a lot of things ... like a person standing amidst a crowd in fast-forward, so that they're standing there in normal time while everything moves past them. Also brings up the pool of blood next to the dead body holding the still-smoking gun.

So, it was pretty good and thought-provoking. Great work!

Felicia.

^_^ I know, it's such a cause for celebration! This was sweet, though, and I love the last two lines. Very cool.