Im still reading! (i used to be kats_rule123) i didnt think this chapter was awkward at all. it seemed a little rushed in time, but thats probably just me. you werent thinking about stopping writing were you? NU i love this story! xD i cant wait for it to get deeper into the plot it sounds like a good one ^^

THIS WAS SO GREAT...WOW!!

I really liked this chappie...very nice!! The flow was perfect!! ^_^

This is going to be SO GOOD!! It sounds like and is a Classic!!


UnTil NeXt TimE

LovE You

Niki!!

Wow, this is better than I expected. There needs to be more details on the setting, but overall I really enjoy reading. Do continue this so on. Keep it up. Till next time

adaku-chan

So this is like some kind of Japan fedaul like world? Anyway, I'm not to quick to judge a story when it's only three paragraphs long. But, I'll read the next chapter to see if it'll get better. Till next time

adaku-chan

UPDATE SOON. I like this beginning. It caught my attention easily.

This was good intro...but I'd reeally like to read more. Everything seems ready for the chappie so I'll be waiting for you to update okay!!


UnTil NeXT TImE

Love Ya

NikI