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| sweet-heart22 2008-08-18 ch 7,  | abuseAh! You left it at a cliffy, no! Update soon, the suspense is killing me. |
| sweet-heart22 2008-08-18 ch 1, | abuseoh! i love all of your stories soo much, and this one is off to an awesome start :D can't wait to read the rest of the chapters so far, hope you update soon!! |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-08-03 ch 2, | abuseupdate soon! |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-22 ch 7, | abuseyeah you definitely take forever to update - its been one full year already mate.. this is good stuff, but i wish FP dont have too many authors who string up wonderful stories only to leave it hanging for an eternity before either the next update or giving it up altogether. its horrible for the readers' emotions who are already sucked in deep into the story. |
| MamiPapi 2008-06-22 ch 7, | abusewoa scary dude that Calvin is... |
| Randall K 2008-05-26 ch 3, | abuseI wish you would update this story! I absolutely adore it, along with all your other stories too! |
| BlackWolfCub 2008-05-12 ch 7, | abuseyet again an amazing story keep it up i love your work |
| Jesus Loves 2008-04-09 ch 7, | abuseupdate soon please...h and this isn't going to be one of those affair stories is it? Not that i wouldn't min but it is just so cliche, and Calvin and her could be so cute together |
| PoorEnglishArtist 2008-03-23 ch 3, | abusewoah woah woah. slow down the pace! she cannot even begin to like him after a day or two. 'tis not humanely possible - if you woudl like your characters to be considered 'real' you must make them act so. She hasn't been acting tough. * I would no longer be the quiet soft-spoken princess.* that was said in the first chapter, and yet all that has happened in the two following chapters is her being soft-spoken and quiet - even in her less timid moments. What? And we have the oh-so-understanding prince. who kidnapped her. yeah. right. he shouldn't be all wussy like he is - he should act slightly more deranged than he is now. Still, I do like some of your descriptions, and the basic idea here is good! |
| VintageReminder 2008-03-17 ch 7, | abuseThat was great!! I like James, but I also like Calvin! Update soon!! |
| SapphireEyes16 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abusecold prince and a strong willed princess, makes a good pair, so keep updating! |
| Shelby 2007-12-06 ch 7, anon. | abusethis is a great story! please write more! i really like this thing! |
| Sweet123 2007-11-20 ch 7, | abuseJames is very sweet |
| Sweet123 2007-11-20 ch 6, | abuseI feel for her. |
| Sweet123 2007-11-20 ch 5, | abuseYou get better |