wow, strong emotions... ive been there before, but it doesnt have to be that way. there is someone who can save you, and only you can know who that is.

I liked the starting, there was a little sense of hope there. Towards the end it got a little empty perhaps.

oh my gosh...i love the darkness and emptiness found within this poem!

so i just added to my unique poem c2 cause this is really unique!

"I no longer want to exist
The dead no longer feel pain"

The dead feel nothing, neither pain nor joy. No matter the pain one goes through, death is a path not meant to be followed.

To ask for it, is asking to feel nothing at all. Feeling nothing while someone feels everything for you, is a ceaseless torture for both souls.