 Matthew James Current 2007-11-29 . chapter 1Very nice work here Hidden. Its style/structure is almost what I would call reminiscent of some of my earlier work.
It's a simple piece, but a solid one and pleasent to read. I like what you did with it. :) |
 Nebelfee 2006-11-01 . chapter 1sweet, wonderful, as usual!
sry for the late review..didnt really get the chance to write one earlier!
luv ya poppetje |
 XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2006-10-18 . chapter 1 Oh... I like this a lot. Especially the part referring to drowning in the rain of her own tears. Very beautiful! Nice job hunni! |
 multiples of six 2006-10-18 . chapter 1Ooh. This took me a couple of reads to figure out, but when I did I really liked the idea. It's like, the guardian angel's point of view that no one ever thinks about. It's really good.. =) |