Interesting. It feels like, and I could be wrong here so let me know if I am, you are experimenting with or have shifted your style.

The work is solid insomuch as it doesn't deviate from its intended meaning or feel disjointed. But it feels a little off, as if you are searching for a way to more clearly express yourself through your words.

If this is the case, then it's wonderful! It means you are challenging yourself and are struggling to reach another level of self-expression. This, though difficult, means your work will just keep improving and so with your ability.

So not to sound conceited but I hope I'm right :P

In either case, keep on writing!

I can really relate to this poem beacuse I have been in that situation many times before. You really expressed the light bulb feeling very well. I'm happy your muse is back and hopefully it won't leave again for a while. :)

I have to say i absolutely love this just everything about it spoke to me and feelings poured out of this, i especially like the 2nd stanza, i just connected with it and it happens to say exactly what i'm feeling right now so i love it. I like the ending too, so sweet and so much hope, if you understand what i mean, if not, i'm not too sure i could really tell you becoz i kinda don't really know myself:-) But fab piece i really like it, something original and beautiful!

Well done hun and i have to apologise majorly for not reviewing lately but a lot of stuff has been going on so i hope you don't hate me:-)

Lotsa love
~AC~

i dont exactly know what or who this poem is about, but i like it!
well done sweety!

Aww! Cute! I like... what does Arielle mean? Great job hun! Love ya!!