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| allyg1990 2008-03-27 ch 16,  | abuseI like this so far, keep on going! |
| BrownEyedBeauty 2007-07-08 ch 16, | abuseNice chapter. I can't wait to see what happens at the ball. And the wedding too if you write about that. :D update soon! :D |
| The Masked Marauder 2007-07-08 ch 16, | abuseOh I'm so excited to see how the ball goes! Are you going to do a chapter on the wedding? Great update! |
| BrownEyedBeauty 2007-06-07 ch 15, | abuseI love this story so far, it's awesome! Great writing, and a really good plot too. Interesting characters and it's got lots of moods as well that give it taste. It's just wonderful =D Please, update soon!! |
| Ck90 2007-05-29 ch 15, | abuseIt was funny the way she was just admitting everything without second thought.I think the chapter was very real, based on the emotions of the characters and I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Brandi Marie 2007-05-28 ch 15, | abuseHey! so glad you updated... i am excited to see what happens next... someone dies? someone gets some? some one plots the other plans? its all so exciting! _B.Marie |
| The Masked Marauder 2007-05-28 ch 15, | abuseOh Blaize seems to have some very violent friends... Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Ck90 2007-04-27 ch 14, | abuseI really want to read when Melenia meets up with the guy! I know I sound like a whinning two year old but I can't help myself! Update soon! |
| The Masked Marauder 2007-04-24 ch 14, | abuseOh assasins are always interesting!! I feel stupid, because I have nothing to criticize...you're getting so good with spelling/grammar etc..!! Keep it up!! :) |
| Ck90 2007-04-20 ch 13, | abuseDid Romeos Betray Rose? I think he did. He is only interested in his own well being. I can't wait for Arius and Melania to meet! That should be very interesting. |
| Brandi Marie 2007-04-19 ch 13, | abuseO, i like. Very good. I like the Cliff hanger at the end... not HURRY lol just kidding. B. Marie |
| just4me 2007-04-18 ch 13, anon. | abuseupdate |
| Lorilozz 2007-04-17 ch 13, | abuseGood update. I can't wait for Arius to see Melinia and their son. I thought it was hilarious that Rose punched Marius... she has such a temper. Can't wait for more about the main couple though. Update soon. |
| Ck90 2007-04-05 ch 12, | abuseAh waiting! The one thing I really suck at! LOL. Yeah anyway I can't wait for Melenia to meet her well... lover. It should be so cute, and of course Blaize and Arai, their lives a re so chaotic and dramatic. |
| Brandi Marie 2007-04-02 ch 12, | abuseHello once again, well i am keeping up with your story and this chapter is very good. I like the little story with melinia... but i am not sure if i found a flaw our not... um you said that Ayras was almost six at the end but if Melinia had slept with Arius and Meinia is older than Bliaze... i dunno i guess i wasnt paying attention or got confused but the numbers dont add up in my head.. lol. i dunno i will read it again real fast. But i love it and just cant wait to the big party. keep up the good work. *B. Marie* |