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Reviews For: Better than this
wildximagination 2007-12-22 . chapter 1
That was awesome. The way you ended it was just perfect. :D
Zachery S. Mills 2006-12-26 . chapter 1
lol the last sentence was a perfect ending!
ADSpencer 2006-10-25 . chapter 1
Whambam! What an ending! Nice use of irony. Great story!
braindead1345 2006-10-19 . chapter 1
That was a great ending. You think that every thing is going to be good then the kid shoots him. Brillent!
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