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HGiel
2007-11-22
ch 1,
abuseYou did a good job on it, though Im not sure what it has to do with peer pressure?
Butcher Cutter
2007-11-12
ch 1, anon.
abusePeer pressure of being . . . a cutter?
Chidori Nadare
2007-11-10
ch 1,
abuse"It was just a simple butcher knife." A perfect beginning and ending. Very emotional, you could feel the emotions pouring out. I think my thoughts about butcher knifes will never be the same again.


-C.N
Xienne
2006-11-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey! This is nice bit of writing...very deep. Nice phrase, like you keep emphasing the word simple. Did you have the experience of cutting yourself and savouring the pain? Because the feelings are very accurate (i personally are one of those people, so i know)

Keep it up!
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