ooh I really liked the you still can't save then it ended. it seems to suggest something. like "you can't save" so many things or something. and it definitely leaves everything to the reader's imagination. interesting. and I really like how you broke down Superman into very basic stuff. (: he's not that great after all. (:

i love it...especially the way you describe the character and then giving it such a simple ending. it leaves this lasting impression

I like it... Keep wirting!:P

this is stunning. although the 'superhero' theme isn't new, this piece is refreshing and original. my favourite stanzas are: 'you were born/ from tied-together basic shapes/ and erased undone lines' and 'moreover,/ don’t entice me'. lovely.