I love this poem. It really speaks to my heart. It's just perfect. Wow. I... wow. I'm impressed. :)

Very powerfull and very sad but its great and the Shakespeare quote at the starting made it a winner in my books.

Wolf.

Loved it.
So beautiful and dark.
Awesome.

Even Gods Dream x

Yes, this sounds a bit angsty. But only a bit, and life is angsty, anyway. I love your last two lines; they are so true of how life often is. Sometimes possibility is worth so much more than risk.

I like it. Love how you used shakespeare as a inspiration! So many people forget who our role models should be...but n e ways

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