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Scribe Of All Trades
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abusehonest and dramatic. nice...
Tytherpol
2007-04-30
ch 1,
abuseIt's pretty honest
(and/but as always, beautiful.)
Rebecca Kelsey
2006-11-14
ch 1,
abuse"to the point
we’re not rabid
and teeth bearing"
^I love those lines.^

Btw, on the last line did you mean "our"?
sunday night sky
2006-10-27
ch 1,
abusecould use some punctuation, but other than that, this piece is great! the first line is intriguing and leads the reader on till the end. very painful and dramatic. i love it :D
mizu no kokoro
2006-10-26
ch 1,
abusevery vivid and the idea is well expressed, good work.

keep writing!
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