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| Scribe Of All Trades 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abusehonest and dramatic. nice... |
| Tytherpol 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuseIt's pretty honest (and/but as always, beautiful.) |
| Rebecca Kelsey 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuse"to the point we’re not rabid and teeth bearing" ^I love those lines.^ Btw, on the last line did you mean "our"? |
| sunday night sky 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abusecould use some punctuation, but other than that, this piece is great! the first line is intriguing and leads the reader on till the end. very painful and dramatic. i love it :D |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abusevery vivid and the idea is well expressed, good work. keep writing! |