Nice, this is very well written. I like the story that's behind this poem. I like this a lot, definatley write more.

wow Ive never read anything like this...but I really like it...the first 3 lines are absolutely amazing...you lose me alittle through the middle but you come back with a good finish...but those first 3 lines just get me

You just wrote what I've been trying to say. Keep up the good work, I love it.

Alot emotions play in this and i can't help but sense lose. Good poem.

Wolf.