|Reviews for Almost There|
| purple x pen 2/20/08 . chapter 1
i love the optimism of this piece.
| Kathryn 10/19/06 . chapter 1
I like it, sad :( But I like the flow and the way the ending sounds. Good Job!
| SoMyLuck 10/19/06 . chapter 1
Short and sweet. The repetition in this poem really goes well.
I also like the theme. It is something a large amount of people can relate to, I'm sure.
It is a sad poem, but I think it could maybe make someone want to recover from a broken relationship.
| L. A. Solvang 10/19/06 . chapter 1
This one was really sweet! I think the fact it's just a "few lines" that makes it hold that (bitter) sweetness. I'm impressed you made it rhyme, too, in a more original way then I usually see. Well done. :D!