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| editor 2007-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abusewell...this is interesting. generally, i am a big fan of chatroom stories and instant message storeis, but im not actulaly abig fan of this one. i know what danny phantom is, bu ti think u went way over the top with all the references to him and to the show. tone it down a little and please dont make it so fake. think of the way teenagers really talk online and type like that. "A" for effort though. |
| winchester666 2007-02-23 ch 1,  | abuseCute beginning! I like the style! :D |
| Aleego 2007-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is funny! lol I love Danny Phantom too. Are you going to carry this story on? It's really good. :) |
| Sakka-Fenikkusu 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseAn amusing read, but I don't think that you should try so much to fit your characters under stereotypes. |
| Max Radio 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseAre you possibly a fan of that one book, 'ttyl', I forgot who it was by, but it was really popular for a while? I'm always a fan of 'different' styles of writing. 8/10, still needs more chapters. |