oh. someone's a good writer :p
this is really good.
and it's also written in a style that i really, really like.
i can't really describe that style, just know that it works, and it reads beautifully.

yaya, tell Clap this is really good and also that I think he is cool :) love the shape of it, and there's some beautiful imagery.

I really like it...

I really like the divide in "As you don't love/me"

cool poem...the "fine fur of pride" thing stands out like a sore thumb though, because it's the only image of an object that we get in the poem. and from my perception, when i think of fur and pride, i think of warmpth and passion (in it's emotional sense of being violent)...and it doesn't really connect for me with this feeling of abandonment/rejection. Other than that one line, the poem is cool.

aw man that was gorgeous! Seriously this is an incredibly beautiful poem. To me these could very easily be song lyrics. Congratulations to Clap on a fine poem! (does he know its been published?)

M and maybe Lavender Knight has a point too?

It occurs to me that perhaps Clap is telling you something, Craig.